One day a grey cat got friend too play with until a budgie drops a spoon on the cat and turtle why they were sleeping and woke up the cat.The cat run after the budgie too the middle of nowhere it was dusty and dry and they got lost. The cat was starving so it went too look for food and then it came across some moist mushrooms the cat thought they were alright to eat but they weren't they were poisonous and dangerous so they need to work together to find some help.
HERES SOME OF MY EXSPOSITION
WALT:know how to plan an exposition 17/5/11 WALT:know how to plan an exposition.
Exposition: Greytown school should finish at 4.00pm
Disagree position
No free time
No time to hang with family and friends and go to the shops.
miss out on sports practice
You want get enough time to get ready for sport practice
Not enough time to skateboard
no skateboarding no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. i need to skateboard.
17/5/11 I disagree that school should finish at 4.00pm because i like to skateboard anwont get enough time to skateboard and land new tricks also other people that play sports like rugby,soccer,cricket,netball,and basketball people that play those sports have no time to go to practice and then they want learn new stuff.
If school ends at 4.00pm you wont get enough time to hang with mates and family so if your going to your friends or family’s birthday you cant go.You also cant get enough sleep.
heres something else Mystery Piece of writing I was finally on my way. My wayTo the other side of the world to visit my long lost pet parrot squaky. I was so amazed, firstly by the fact that I was able to visit my long lost pet parrot and also the fact that my Mum and Dad had actually paid for the trip over at all! I couldn’t stand it any more I leapt out of my seat and went up to the front of the plane to ask the pilot if he could go any faster. He said that he could take a short cut but he would have to drop off the few passengers that were on the plane ---first. Quicker than I thought there was one to be seenwe had nobody on board and and we were on our way. I was going crazy knowing that I I would be getting to my long lost pet parrot quicker. I went back and sat down in my seat. BANG! I woke with a shock and looked out the window and we were over a desert. Luckily I looked out the window because I saw that the planes wing had caught fire. I immediately went and told the captain. He said he had heard the bang and already noticed the problem. He told me to go back to my seat and get into the evasive manoeuvre. I thought I was going to die but I didn’t and I nearly had a heart attack because it was the most thrilling thing I’ve ever done. I went walking because the captain was dead and soon came to ginormous sand hill. I climbed it and I was sweating so hard when I got to the top. I decided to take a look around. I saw a lush cool oasis with buildings on the side but very far away. I saw a dark green tree that I could climb to see if any one was at the buildings or in the oasis waters. When I got to the top of the tree I noticed that there the branches were sticking up over the top of the bush. I went and snapped one off for a walking stick it was rough wood and gave me lots of splinters. I ditched it and got a drink. Then I went and visited the buildings.
There was a cat there and it was so soft and furry. I had a closer look and it seemed to be hugging a turtle. The turtle seemed to be all hard and firm so I wondered why they were hugging each other. I thought the logical explanation was that the cat was blind and it was attacking a bird/turtle and had fallen asleep on top of it. The owners came home and asked why i was here, I told them about my plane crash. They asked if I want to stay for tee. I said i would love to.
They asked if I can go out and get some mushrooms from the garden so I went out to the garden and looked around for some mushrooms. There’s no mushrooms in sight so I went a little deeper in to there garden and all of a sudden I’m in a rain forest, there’s some kind of fungi on the side of a tree they looked so moist and perfect and then when I picked them they were so squishy and spongy I decided to take these back to the house. I was about to leave when I heard a fimiliar squaking sound coming from behind me.
I quickly turned around and there flying down from the trees was squawky. He looked so amazing like nothing I ever imagined. He had slim bright coloured wings and his face was a bright happy yellow with black spots. We began our journey home.
HERES SOME OF MY EXSPOSITION
WALT:know how to plan an exposition
17/5/11
WALT:know how to plan an exposition.
Exposition: Greytown school should finish at 4.00pm
17/5/11
I disagree that school should finish at 4.00pm because i like to skateboard anwont get enough time to skateboard and land new tricks also other people that play sports like rugby,soccer,cricket,netball,and basketball people that play those sports have no time to go to practice and then they want learn new stuff.
If school ends at 4.00pm you wont get enough time to hang with mates and family so if your going to your friends or family’s birthday you cant go.You also cant get enough sleep.
heres something else
Mystery Piece of writing
I was finally on my way. My wayTo the other side of the world to visit my long lost pet parrot squaky. I was so amazed, firstly by the fact that I was able to visit my long lost pet parrot and also the fact that my Mum and Dad had actually paid for the trip over at all!
I couldn’t stand it any more I leapt out of my seat and went up to the front of the plane to ask the pilot if he could go any faster. He said that he could take a short cut but he would have to drop off the few passengers that were on the plane ---first. Quicker than I thought there was one to be seenwe had nobody on board and and we were on our way. I was going crazy knowing that I
I would be getting to my long lost pet parrot quicker. I went back and sat down in my seat. BANG! I woke with a shock and looked out the window and we were over a desert. Luckily I looked out the window because I saw that the planes wing had caught fire. I immediately went and told the captain. He said he had heard the bang and already noticed the problem. He told me to go back to my seat and get into the evasive manoeuvre. I thought I was going to die but I didn’t and I nearly had a heart attack because it was the most thrilling thing I’ve ever done. I went walking because the captain was dead and soon came to ginormous sand hill. I climbed it and I was sweating so hard when I got to the top. I decided to take a look around. I saw a lush cool oasis with buildings on the side but very far away. I saw a dark green tree that I could climb to see if any one was at the buildings or in the oasis waters. When I got to the top of the tree I noticed that there the branches were sticking up over the top of the bush. I went and snapped one off for a walking stick it was rough wood and gave me lots of splinters. I ditched it and got a drink. Then I went and visited the buildings.
There was a cat there and it was so soft and furry. I had a closer look and it seemed to be hugging a turtle. The turtle seemed to be all hard and firm so I wondered why they were hugging each other. I thought the logical explanation was that the cat was blind and it was attacking a bird/turtle and had fallen asleep on top of it. The owners came home and asked why i was here, I told them about my plane crash. They asked if I want to stay for tee. I said i would love to.
They asked if I can go out and get some mushrooms from the garden so I went out to the garden and looked around for some mushrooms. There’s no mushrooms in sight so I went a little deeper in to there garden and all of a sudden I’m in a rain forest, there’s some kind of fungi on the side of a tree they looked so moist and perfect and then when I picked them they were so squishy and spongy I decided to take these back to the house. I was about to leave when I heard a fimiliar squaking sound coming from behind me.
I quickly turned around and there flying down from the trees was squawky. He looked so amazing like nothing I ever imagined. He had slim bright coloured wings and his face was a bright happy yellow with black spots. We began our journey home.